A well paced thoroughly enyoble read. I heartilly congratulate you on a job well done author. Though I advise that you take time to proof read your work. I notice you have an excellent command of language but there are errors in chapter which you will easily pick up such as using repeating use of an adjective (then) within the same and paragraph and writing back in instead of bag. Though these minor errors, at least from my perspective do not take anything away from pace of your peace master, I urge you to proof read your work
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