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Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv51yr
2023-04-01 20:13

I still didn't understand what mistake author made in his first attempt, but this one is a good story. The only problem I have is a flimsy curiousity of mc. I can't really say what and why he found interesting. Like bunny girl is boring but flash is alright? Sure... Maybe it's a power deal? But then again, harley is just a human. But she is hot so good? Eh, whatever. Anyway, just don't expect anything especially from harem. No one knows how his weird tastes works. P. S. You know that you can make a yandere, you don't need to found one? And harley isn't yandere, she is just crazy. It's kinda different. Eeeh.

DC: Celestial Light Human

SwayStar
4.5
96 Chs

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I'll never understand why people struggle making a compassionate and kind main character

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FadeKnight
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Typical ero story. Everything revolves around females and the mc.

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Read it.

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Legendary. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

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Lucifer_Evrosia05
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Really loved the original, hope this one is just as good👍

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Jackleell
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"This is illogical god grants powers to someone who isn't a good person. Yes, a god is forgiving, but giving powers to someone unstable is questionable. Why is he unstable? Let's see: he starts associating with someone who tortured and killed the original host of the body, which is quite cringe-worthy."

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Just not for me. Goodluck on your journey. ciao

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