So this story has basically everything one can get in cliche. A cliche ntr'd Mc A weak to Op Mc Easy to get Harem Members A lot of common troupes. And my final review? It's good, I mean freaking good if you just ignore the writing quality which is a bit bad, but well I have read thousands of novels, cliche, or whatnot and I have enough common sense to tell if a story with cliches is good or bad. Mc isn't a beta JP or CP and becomes fairly smart and cunning after receiving one blow after another quite early, he gets women using his cunningness despite it having some cliche elements the end result is quite satisfactory. What are the good points of this novel? 1) Good No, of Chapters. 2) Stable updates(I am not sure about this, I mean Author is giving regular chapters but it can change anytime considering he is going in university) 3) Good World Building( World Building is satisfactory at least till I have read, only things necessary to the current story are explained which are simple and easy to remember, it also gives Author huge flexibility when he will expand the world-building later on) 4) Good Characters( Mc of the novel is a guy with flaws, but they aren't the flaws one would normally dislike at least during the later chapters, I mean he is using his cunningness and dominating all the women he wants to, no simply act or something, seriously I would have given a 1-star review if Mc was like that, those type of Mc's are super annoying following females like dogs, but yes his flaws are not something that will make you dislike him, he has a quite likable personality as well leaning more towards a smart villain than an honest good guy, but yup he isn't a straight up villain either. And yeah other female characters have been fleshed out well as well, I mean it's not something excellent but at least you can't just dislike them for lack of any character.) Now, what is bad about this Novel? 1) A lot of cliches are used though they aren't bad at all, I mean Author is new and he thankfully managed to put off these cliches quite well. 2)Writing Quality is not excellent but quite good. 3)Mc has flaws, some major ones which get 100% better as the story goes on but doesn't changes the fact some of his flaws might be disliked by some of the readers(Don't worry no simpy or beta Mc) My Final Review? 4.6 stars which will definitely be shown as mere 4 stars
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