just more rubbish.... this here is total wish fulfillment, the author is pretty excited about it..................... Haaaaaaaaaaa thash haaaaaaaaaaaa
hunterxxhunter2011
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贊Yes but there are different levels of it, sometimes is just too much. If you have great writing skills and make the story interesting this problem may be overcomed a little but this is not the case.
KyoXIzu:Isn’t the basis of most fanfic “wish fulfi llment”image
It depends on how you carry the story, it can catch you as if you were in that world or it could be as if a strange friend read you his personal diary.
KyoXIzu:Isn’t the basis of most fanfic “wish fulfi llment”image
Yunick:Yes but there are different levels of it, sometimes is just too much. If you have great writing skills and make the story interesting this problem may be overcomed a little but this is not the case.
i stopped reading it long ago the day i posted my comment at least i don´t give the author a bad review since i hope he keeps writing, yes i don´t like it but i think people can get better if they keep writing, i don´t say it with bad intentionts.
Reggielacey_223:Don't read it then...oh wait
Yunick:Yes but there are different levels of it, sometimes is just too much. If you have great writing skills and make the story interesting this problem may be overcomed a little but this is not the case.