Not bad at all, not many fanfics let the MC pursue a purely martial path without some cultivation/magic bs just for plot armor or something like that. I like the fact that different martial arts were introduced so it's not a repetitive cycle of 'punch, kick, punch' like most writers present as of today (seriously, you'd be surprised at how many just write stuff along the lines of "X punched Y to the sky, then kicked Y back to the ground" without any details whatsoever.) the fact that the world is more 'balanced' with the 2x increase in difficulty makes for an interesting premise when talking about how will the plot develop, don't need to mention how it'll affect cannon because it still hasn't started so it remains to be seen. overall a good novel, could give a little bit more background to the world outside of martial arts and the tournaments and the characters be developed over time, the writing quality is good and I've seen little to no mistakes in the wording and grammar. thank you for giving us a good novel and hope to see more of it in the near future, keep improving and i wish you the best of luck with it~~
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