The story had a rough start at first with the world building as too many different lifetimes were being fleshed out at the same time, but now as of 71 I feel the story has truly hit it's stride. Author was a little over the top with MC after leaving the academy on the mission with the Cheesy Cringe speech and actions. However now the interactions between characters are moving along with a normal feel and if they stay this way, the story will shape up to be really good. The one fear I have is MC gets stronger with Dual Cultivation, but I don't feel any desire in the MC to get stronger with the best way possible. I hope that changes and he is able to progress with the Harem in a smooth consistent way... I have seen a few Dual Cultivation novels where MC starts DC path to get stronger then for some reason or another finds ways not to do it or can't do it, or makes excuses why he didn't.. But so far the story is really enjoyable and is in a good spot right now.
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