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2023-04-12 20:53

there is something about the mc i just cant find myself to like but dislike instead i dont know if its beacuse hes uninterested in knowing all his stats and the possible powers this world has like when he says he only wants to see his strength and he doesn't care about energy like you're in a new world shouldn't you use everything to your advantage and figure the type of situation your are in? the actual situation not you just sitting in a hospital like what is energy the system is talking about? can you use it? i just don't like or understand how mc can be satisfied not knowing as much as he can about his current situation. That disinterest in the beginning chapters just makes me uninterested to continue reading cause it makes me wonder if he would ignore things like this in the future and how detrimental it would be to him in the future from my understanding the system is bounded to the body which makes no sense cause systems are usually bounded to the soul in the novels i usually read but I can't think of it being transferred to hunt in any other method unless the system was given to chase after hunt souls took over i can understand doing a different approach but its kinda confusing to me. In the first chapter when mc reincarnated it said nothing about him fusing/absorbing/consuming Ethan Chase's soul so how can there be a remnant will when a body is just a shell and a soul is what controls it that just makes no sense Why is MC miving like a dumb virgin when step mother was introduced not even thinking properly and i also dont like how the system was not made for hunt hut for chase i gave the rating i did beacuse thats how i am feeling rn after giving it a second try Despite all i said still give it a try you just my find the perfect novel for you as everyone is different and has different opinions and preferences (i found no grammatical errors and author writing seems fluid and easy to read to me

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