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Garessta
GaresstaLv31yr
2023-03-06 12:57

The start is slow, but the intrigue is here, and the time is spent on character development and stuff like that. Very nice writing style, btw, 5 stars. There's some humor, too, I like that. Overall I can't say much about this novel except that it's a solid system story. I'd personally move the exposition somewhat farther from the start and make it more... action-ny? Idk. But yeah, action is solely missing in the first chaps.

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slowpokeChaos
slowpokeChaos作者

Well that's how I write. Going slow at first, developing the arc and then ending it with a bang.

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K7RM4
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there is something about the mc i just cant find myself to like but dislike instead i dont know if its beacuse hes uninterested in knowing all his stats and the possible powers this world has like when he says he only wants to see his strength and he doesn't care about energy like you're in a new world shouldn't you use everything to your advantage and figure the type of situation your are in? the actual situation not you just sitting in a hospital like what is energy the system is talking about? can you use it? i just don't like or understand how mc can be satisfied not knowing as much as he can about his current situation. That disinterest in the beginning chapters just makes me uninterested to continue reading cause it makes me wonder if he would ignore things like this in the future and how detrimental it would be to him in the future from my understanding the system is bounded to the body which makes no sense cause systems are usually bounded to the soul in the novels i usually read but I can't think of it being transferred to hunt in any other method unless the system was given to chase after hunt souls took over i can understand doing a different approach but its kinda confusing to me. In the first chapter when mc reincarnated it said nothing about him fusing/absorbing/consuming Ethan Chase's soul so how can there be a remnant will when a body is just a shell and a soul is what controls it that just makes no sense Why is MC miving like a dumb virgin when step mother was introduced not even thinking properly and i also dont like how the system was not made for hunt hut for chase i gave the rating i did beacuse thats how i am feeling rn after giving it a second try Despite all i said still give it a try you just my find the perfect novel for you as everyone is different and has different opinions and preferences (i found no grammatical errors and author writing seems fluid and easy to read to me

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BishopsNemesis
BishopsNemesisLv1

This review has been written based on the first 5 chapters of the novel. I highly recommend reading this novel since it is written by non other than Chaos himself. Writing Quality: The writing quality in the first five chapters seems reasonably good. The author has effectively established the main character, Ethan Chase, and his inner agitation and desires. The writing is clear and straightforward, and the author does an incredible job of describing the setting and characters in detail. SlowpokeChaos is a fantastic author as evident to this. World Building: The idea of triggering memories through specific events adds depth to the plot and creates a potential for pretty lovely character development. The details provided on the system are intriguing and leave room for further exploration. The system's user-friendly nature is a nice touch and makes it easier for the reader to understand the plot. The fact that the system can answer questions based on the protagonist's intentions is a clever addition and adds complexity to worldbuilding. The world building in the novel has potential and is sure to keep the reader engaged. The combination of reincarnation and a memory-navigating system is unique and sets the stage for a fascinating story. Character Development: Ethan is driven by his desires and willing to do anything to get what he wants. However, as he lies on the rooftop and reflects on his life, I see the weight of his regrets and the emptiness that comes with them. This is a significant development as it shows that Ethan is starting to realise the consequences of his actions and the pain he has caused others. I started to see a change in Ethan's perspective as he was reincarnated into his current body. He needs clarification initially about his new life and the memories that come with it. However, as he interacts with the system, Ethan becomes more accepting of his new reality and the information that is revealed to him. This is a crucial development as it shows that Ethan is becoming more open-minded and willing to explore new possibilities. One more thing, Ethan's desire for revenge is a driving point throughout the first five chapters. This aspect of his personality is complicated and multi-faceted, providing a more in-depth understanding of Ethan's inspirations and what drives him. This also delivers an excellent opportunity for the author to delve into Ethan's character development as the story progresses. I'm waiting for the day that Ethan start to break hearts left and right.

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