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2022-12-03 04:16

The first few chapters were great and showed a lot of potential. I was glad knowing we would get some type of warrior-like main character and the "byaku-sharingan" thing did not bother me i was looking forward to it even. However we end up like every other ff where the MC turns into a mage, learn mystic arts, he can do it all. End result is a bland copy/paste MC who does not specialize in anything. He is just missing some skill-steal ability and he would be like any second rate system fanfic MC out there.

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