This is pretty good. A fairly well written system novel with actual originality, quite a rare find these days. The system isn't overpowered but still feels satisfying to read. The protagonist while somewhat generic is noticeably more chill than the average system protagonist, he isn't constantly referring to China or being a racist or misogynist which is a huge plus. The world building is quite standard, the story is decent and there's nothing to complain about when it comes to the pacing, quality of writing and translation quality, it's all pretty good. In short, it's a well executed novel with a respectable protagonist, system and concept. I'm fond of novels like this one, they aren't the most ambitious but pull off what they're trying to do well enough to be entertaining. 4.25/5

Idk if it’s a harem (kinda gives the vibes(hope it isn’t tbh)) but until it shows otherwise this story’s actually pretty good so far (as of ch. 30). I really hope they pick this novel honestly. Highly recommend as of this moment.

Typical chinese story where problem come after mc to his door even if he stays at home all year around... also its full of young master stuff to the brim... also its no different from typical stupid mc who just won't backoff even if it means getting in trouble.... and author constantly made powerfull enemy coming after our mc one by one for apparant illogical coincidence which makes mc life always under the crisis.....its preety much very very illogical that how even if mc stay at home all the time 1 level higer villain always keep coming after him.

Ch 20 I like the system, it op but not too op short term but could potentially allow mc to reach infinite heights and break limits. The story so far is quite lacking, most characters are quite normal and it seems that arrogant and cliche cultivation characters are rare and distinct be it because of background or simply because they are the Protagonist or realeated to one. Mc is slightly slow and almost everyone else is slightly faster than mc mentally so far except some but it's tolerable. I liked the cheat but other than that nothing is exceptional.

This book is written so weirdly, like it glossed and introduces seemingly important aspects of the story midway with no clarification whatsoever and uses terms that literally no ones ever before in a casual way. It's also weird how Did Maner is 16 and described in a sexual manner, hella strange. I don't get how people praise this book for the fact that it isn't a harem but is 9 okay with sexualizing an actual 16 year old...

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The story is pretty good but the translation is letting it down a lot. The phrases and wording are especially jarring to read. I know I'm complaining but if you're gonna translate a book for people to pay to read, at least make an effort!

The book is decent but the main frustrating thing is the MC is subpar. He causes the reader to get frustrated because he repeatedly falls for simple traps. Over, and over, and over, and then over again. He knows what will happen in the future, he knows who the villains are, and when the invite him to leave the sect or offer him a "gift" he always accepts, falls for the trap, and ends up in a bad situation. This feels super forced.

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Fairly good for the type of story it is. It has the bonus of being a 'cannon fodder' MC VS the 'female protagonist's harem'. Story allows the MC to affect the world by having foreknowledge of the 'story' so that he can change some outcomes such that they fall more in his favor. He is also able to split the world luck by creating a second 'female protagonist'. This should be a good one to pick up.