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Zhoa_Fei
Zhoa_FeiLv132yr
2022-10-24 13:15

My biggest point of contention with the story is how dialogue is structured. While not terrible, It can be a bit difficult to read it in that manner. Other than that, the story appears to have some potential. I'll keep it in my back pocket, and see if any changes transpire. Although not my cup of tea. I would recommend it to someone that was interested in this genre. It is a solid story with potential. The presentation of it could be better executed.

CEO stoles my first kiss

Khadija_Mayo
4.7
45 Chs

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Khadija_Mayo
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Okay, I will try to avoid it in upcoming chapters😇

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Highly Recommended The coolest novel I've ever read. The language selection is very good, the character depiction is very strong, and the plot is unpredictable. Every chapter is full of surprises. Once read can not stop. I feel like reading until the happy ending. For all of you novelists. It's a must to read this novel, guaranteed to be addicted. Love author❤

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KiranAwan
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It's a great story, 😀I hope it starts off so beautifully that it gets even more interesting going forward😊, I found it very interesting and would like to read more and look forward to his next chaps😍😍😍

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ZoeTinnah
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Nice story development and character development . Everything starts off cool. Author Keep that spirit of writing no matter what obstacles Keep on writing

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obiparadise_purity
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The character design is very good, I love it. I can tell it's going to be an interesting and funny story with the character Stella. There is also room for improvement, all the best author.

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I read first few chapters and I can't wait to read more chapters. The plot and characters both are captivating. Keep up the good work author 👍

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This is a kind of story that gets interesting in the long run. Updates are stable, good character picks, worldbuilding is good. Again the story development will progress. The one flaw I noticed is actually the writing/tenses. While this is understandable for a new writer, I hope the author keeps reading and writing to solidify her own style. Keep it up author! 💗

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Favour_Stephen5651
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Am curious to know who the manager might be? 💚 And I'll like to see how Stella's love story goes in the near future. Its sad how Alexander's feelings aren't returned 💔 Its a good one 👍

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