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Levicious_Xazabi
Levicious_Xazabi作者2yr
2022-10-09 09:49

Shameless Author here for liking his own fanfic so... don't mind me

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Dao_of_bonks
Dao_of_bonksLv4

Author do mc have system shooo away ntr and Hanime mc do a fighting vs many people like in lookism oof i love james lee fight and all the charactor really

Levicious_Xazabi
Levicious_Xazabi作者

Well Have you ever read a fanfic entitled Otaku no Harem with System? cause it's pretty much same just with few difference

Dao_of_bonks:Author do mc have system shooo away ntr and Hanime mc do a fighting vs many people like in lookism oof i love james lee fight and all the charactor really
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Dao_of_bonks
Dao_of_bonksLv4

I love no harem and harem it just my mood JUST KEEP CHANGING UGHHH Ik but the ntr on mc girlfriend it just oof it feel like my past she se* with my bully in school that keep haunting me and they just not stop bully me and other so.....that my perceptive so he need to be stronger and stronger like mission : yokazura family and sakamoto days those are still human? Idk but they are cool

Levicious_Xazabi
Levicious_Xazabi作者

In chapter 2 it's mentioned that Levi keep training to get stronger cause he don't know in this world there is supernatural side or not

Dao_of_bonks:I love no harem and harem it just my mood JUST KEEP CHANGING UGHHH Ik but the ntr on mc girlfriend it just oof it feel like my past she se* with my bully in school that keep haunting me and they just not stop bully me and other so.....that my perceptive so he need to be stronger and stronger like mission : yokazura family and sakamoto days those are still human? Idk but they are cool
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Levicious_Xazabi
Levicious_Xazabi作者

You have my condolences~

Dao_of_bonks:I love no harem and harem it just my mood JUST KEEP CHANGING UGHHH Ik but the ntr on mc girlfriend it just oof it feel like my past she se* with my bully in school that keep haunting me and they just not stop bully me and other so.....that my perceptive so he need to be stronger and stronger like mission : yokazura family and sakamoto days those are still human? Idk but they are cool
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Dao_of_bonks
Dao_of_bonksLv4

But.....he like what 5 or 10 idk but push up sit up 1-10 km run squat that i read used the same workout but anyway how strong is he above human limit or a pro boxer level cuz the i read it he can beat any student level high school level ya know

Levicious_Xazabi:In chapter 2 it's mentioned that Levi keep training to get stronger cause he don't know in this world there is supernatural side or not
Levicious_Xazabi
Levicious_Xazabi作者

What do you want to talk about? Please read properly! I just explained in that chapter that Levi beats any guy who wants to try to get close to his girlfriends or sister. And you think a high school boy would be attracted to a girl who only went to elementary school?

Dao_of_bonks:But.....he like what 5 or 10 idk but push up sit up 1-10 km run squat that i read used the same workout but anyway how strong is he above human limit or a pro boxer level cuz the i read it he can beat any student level high school level ya know
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Levicious_Xazabi
Levicious_Xazabi作者

My fanfic is not the one where the MC in chapter 2 can kill God, make a storm just by sneezing and so on. There's a #weaktostrong tag on there and it's not just for decoration. Sorry to disappointing you if you want Overpowered MC

Dao_of_bonks:But.....he like what 5 or 10 idk but push up sit up 1-10 km run squat that i read used the same workout but anyway how strong is he above human limit or a pro boxer level cuz the i read it he can beat any student level high school level ya know
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Dao_of_bonks
Dao_of_bonksLv4

It ok Im sorry for wasting ur time author san

Devang98
Devang98Lv6

your mother is more shameless than you so it comparetively its ok.

huH2
huH2Lv4

well can u share ur cover photo and profile picture for my future research only

Levicious_Xazabi:Well Have you ever read a fanfic entitled Otaku no Harem with System? cause it's pretty much same just with few difference
Levicious_Xazabi
Levicious_Xazabi作者

Sure~ 'Rule34 / Sakimichan'

huH2:well can u share ur cover photo and profile picture for my future research only
Other Reviews
Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

I whould give it's 5 star ,because mc attitude with girls is quite admirable. He doesn't create some useless drama and wants to take girls which he liked. That's whould be already enough for a good reading time. Unfortunately, author is buthurt stupid mongrel. That's dislikes a useless trophy wifes (which I totally agree with) and wants to make things more "logical". Let's look at his closely. 11 years old reincarnator tells his mommy that he takes over her son body - it's great that this stupidity was glosed over soon, but just think about it. Let it sink. How dumb is this? Don't get me started that relationship and interaction between them, is literally one paragraph. What readers supposed to think? Does he start to see her as his actual mother even though he does have family before? No answers, just assume and pretend that this is right thing to do. Okay... Fine. Every girls start to train with weapons and different skills to be useful... Let me tell you, they wasn't intrested in any of this skills. They not coming from martial arts or shounen anime. And author just saying, yeah from now on they all useful. Talented and expirienced in killing and taking care of themselves... Normal,little girls, living an easy life in modern time...just with a bit training talking about claiming others life. They could take anothers route to help out mc, like working on getting money. Actually be housewifes ,whatever feminists talking it's a good way to support husband. Learning different skills in future like alchemy, blacksmitting, anything at all. Living they lives as normal girls. No, because author was hurt by stupid cringe, he create different stupid cringe and claim this stupidity as smart decision. Well f7cking done. Brilliant. Now I am buthurt. Thank you,mongrel.

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