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Alexrichi23
Alexrichi23Lv22yr
2022-11-08 09:04

The story is good and interesting, but it's hard to read, sometimes I don't know who is talking or the situations become confusing and meaningless. If it manages to fix those problems it would be a great read.

I became a rental boyfriend in the reverse world

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2.8
14 Chs

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Noih0
Noih0Lv11

Me when I saw the cover art of this novel : 😫..............................................................................................

2yr

N0_Hope
N0_HopeLv2

The title and the picture had my total attention ... and the synopsis is what I'm looking for... but man your gramar sucks .. you know that google marks in red the words that aren't written well ... please make sentences that make sense ( I'm not asking for the best quality but enough for us to understand ..).

2yr
svenlol
svenlolLv4

Sorry but impossible to read. Grammar sucks really bad

2yr
Coldman
ColdmanLv4

2yr
Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

It's might be a good novel... If I actually could understand anything from writing. Unfortunately, it's beyond me. And I could read mtl novels. So yeah, can't even say anything about it. I don't even understand if this a fanfic or original novel. Thus might be fanfic on some korean novel. Because of the names. But I can't even say for sure if mc is a guy, you see. Genders keep switching and there is no proof. Plus he acts like a beach. The most funny thing, because genders keep switching and names are korean - I don't understand gender of other characters as well. It's funny because mc possible got harassed by other guy... Gays are sure is wild in reverse worlds.

2yr
Young_fruit_Smiley
Young_fruit_SmileyLv14

grammar [img=faceslap][img=faceslap] . it's translation is so bad that even girls can become boy & male can become female 🐑🐏

2yr
Lord_Kemoyin
Lord_KemoyinLv4

Anyone know the source of the novel cover? asking for academic purposes of course ***********************************************************

2yr
MuCoffee
MuCoffeeLv14

dude I've read 10 chapters and I don't think I can continue reading, I feel like I am losing brain cells the more I read like wth is going on. .the grammar is bad .the setting is bad like we don't know much about what's happening .its pretty hard to know who's talking to who .overall this story is giving a brain tumor thank you

1yr
Zeus_Lawliet
Zeus_LawlietLv5

it would have been better if you rewrite it to fix the grammar errors, it's interesting but the mistakes makes it hard to get into it without pausing to think of what they are actually saying

2yr
jackslash_9
jackslash_9Lv4

the grammar and perspective are all over the place using he when it should be she, randomly switching from 1st to 2nd to the perspective of the reader with no prompt, rhyme, or reason. it's almost completely unreadable like this

1yr
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