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Charreos
CharreosLv32yr
2022-09-25 23:07

ok so, the story is... bad the characters are cardboard, no development and also doesn't allow us to see the growth and changes, the story just tells you that something happened after a time skip. I would say that the best way to fix this is to slow down the story so that you could show off OC's and give them life

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Charreos
CharreosLv3

it also only focuses on power which is shallow and boring

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Thanks for the support, I will improve!

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