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2022-09-20 22:44

well, ngl this fic has everything I want. like it has very good Grammer, the Mc is likable( to me he is), thr story is progressing gradually and well, it has some very good jokes, so for the humor alone I would give it 4+, but overall it's an easy 5 star.

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His talking abou my book!!

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Emmanuel_Capricorn:His talking abou my book!!
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If you're looking for a good MHA story, you've found it. In my opinion, this is one of the best MHA stories currently running. I will explain why. Let's start with one of the most basic things about writing a novel, which unfortunately needs to be mentioned because a lot of the stories here are already broken, and that is how real the story is, how much you feel like it's fictional or that it could happen if the world were like this, rather than like a 10 year old writing the interactions of the characters, obviously there's no problem with that here. What many people find objectionable, as I read the other reviews, is that the character acts like Bakugo despite being reincarnated, for those who find that a problem I can tell you, that the main character will have Bakugo's temper (which is the uniqueness and comedy of the story) but it will be explained properly why, or despite having Bakugo's temper he will not be Bakugo, he will act and behave differently than we are used to in the series. His world building is also good so far what he has added to the story so far is fine in my opinion. What is still often a question is harem or not harem. It's still unclear yet both are possible but I personally wish it wasn't harem (#teamTooru because the poor girl doesn't get the attention she deserves and I haven't even met (I don't think it's finished) yet no harem Tooru romantic fanfiction) I hope I've managed to catch some people's attention with this review or boost the author's enthusiasm a bit. I wish everyone a good read of the novel.

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