webnovel
Aaron_Castillo_7915
Aaron_Castillo_7915Lv11yr
2023-05-22 13:50

In my opinion the mc is a push over. Xpxpxpxp

被4人贊過

empty img

沒有回復。 來,成為第一個評論的人!

Other Reviews
Adalfarus
AdalfarusLv14

A Disappointing Dive into Harem Fantasy with an Unlikable Protagonist and Incoherent Narrative I typically avoid harem-style books, but I don't believe they're inherently without merit. If approached with a logical, even scientific perspective (e.g., strong animals often have multiple mates due to evolutionary pressures), it's possible to create an engaging alternate world where humans follow similar patterns. Unfortunately, this book fails to deliver a compelling narrative or a likable protagonist, and suffers from an incoherent plotline. The protagonist is transmigrated into a world where he has a unique system, locked until his 18th birthday. Despite the countdown indicating when it will be unsealed, he still expresses dissatisfaction with his current situation, unfairly blaming the system for his lack of strength and not having more wives. This is particularly off-putting considering his likely origin from a world similar to ours, where having multiple partners is not the norm. His dissatisfaction, when he already has at least two wives/concubines, is a clear sign of perverted greed. In this world, attaining a Buddha-like status is assumed to be rare. However, even if this were true, it doesn't justify the protagonist's selfishness and lack of appreciation for what he has. His inability to value his current relationships and his constant desire for more make him an unsympathetic character that readers will struggle to root for. The narrative also suffers from incoherence and inconsistency. The protagonist is supposedly a godly farmer, yet his farming skills are all battle-related. Instead of planting crops, he acquires plants that either grant him combat skills or function as weapons. The author provides him with a full set of armor and various weapons, which is nonsensical for a farmer character. Furthermore, the exaggerated names for his farming-based skills, such as Supreme Father, God of War, and Beast God, only add to the confusion and undermine the story's potential. In conclusion, this book disappoints on multiple fronts: an unlikable protagonist, narrative inconsistencies, and an incoherent plotline. The exploration of harem dynamics is far from engaging, and I cannot recommend this read. My rating is a disheartening 0/10. (The actual rating is better, because the Translation Quality doesn't suck)

Related Stories

Villain MMORPG: Almighty Devil Emperor and His Seven Demonic Wives

Allen, the legendary player "Godlike", finds himself thrust into the revolutionary fulldive VRMMORPG Hell's Gate's main villain, Azazel. Alongside seven skilled female players, he embarks on a journey filled with unexpected challenges. Confronting his old nemesis and countless players, Allen delves deep into the shadows of his own dark past. Soon, he becomes entangled in a complex web of new relationships and past betrayals. His companions develop feelings for him, not only in the virtual world but also in real life. Balancing his affection for his wives, the chaos of the battlefield, and his thirst for revenge, Allen sets out to attain everything he desires. The legendary player has returned once again, not as the hero but as the villain. He shall claim the title of ultimate villain! ---------------------- Each one of his subordinates represent seven deadly sins: Nefaris (Vampire) -> Pride // Player: Larissa Lullaby (Siren) -> Sloth // Player: Shea Lilieth (Succubus) -> Lust // Player: Vivian Eira (Fox Demon) -> Wrath // Player: Bella Selena (Witch) -> Envy // Player: Alice Abyssia (Kraken) -> Gluttony // Player : Zoe Grimora (Necromancer) -> Greed // Player: Jane -------------------------- Join my discord channel for illustrations: https://discord.gg/mSRHyMVhnG Bonus Chapters! *600 Power Stone = 1 bonus chapter *400 Golden Ticket= 1 bonus chapter *Magic Castle= 2 bonus chapters *Space Craft= 4 bonus chapters Important Note: No NTR, No Yuri, No rape, the relationship will go both in the game and real world. Tags: Mature Content , R-18 , Gore, Comedy , Revenge, Face Slapping, Monster Girls , Succubus , Magic , Demons , Devil , Beasts , Action , Mystery , Overpowered , Harem , System , Servants , Handsome Male Lead , Smart Male Lead and Slice of Life.

UnholyGod · 游戏
4.7
1183 Chs

Supreme Archer: Taking The Game's Weakest Class To The Top

"You're worth a single arrow." The first immersive virtual MMORPG, The Legend Enigma Online, has conquered the game market! There's not even one person who hasn't heard or seen this game's beautiful and vast magical world overflowing with monsters. Everyone wanted to play this game and be a part of history! Conjuring magic, wielding enormous swords, and even flying across the skies are possible in this game! Guns, arrows? Those are boring compared to this! Jake, however, was compelled to think differently. When the archery became abandoned and forgotten, he took this class and swore to prove others wrong, all because he likes to go against the mainstream! With the bow in his hand, Jake finds passion, talent, and excitement in archery, but will that be enough against the challenges the world keeps for him? It's not only the players that find archery weaker than magic. After the dawn of mana, which happened over two hundred years ago, even NPCs prefer magic over bows. While the other classes have been developed so much by NPCs that players have many luxuries to pick from, the archery is now a mere shadow of its past. That's only the tip of the iceberg of the future Supreme Archer's difficulties! "No matter whatever it is and how long it takes, I'll take everything on and get my archery to the top! The archery where I'm the master and artisan of my bows and arrows, the tailor of my equipment, and pioneer of my own skills!" Hard work, talent, bitter defeats, and uproarious victories–none of it is foreign to Jake! https://discord.gg/ZQ4G84ZtRY - discord server for our community!

HomieLv1 · 游戏
4.8
303 Chs