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Reinbjorn
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2024-04-20 03:14

Overall storyline was predictable and the lack of proofreading and editing made this hard to read. Almost 40 chapters in and the author still mispells certain words like “released” and spells it like “realised” and moved like “Leer” are spelled “Lear.” There’s too many side stories from the side characters. One every ten chapters or so is fine but every other chapter is annoying and lacks pushing the storyline. If you like battle scenes, this is a great read; if you like an actual story with plot, don’t waste your time.

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