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Doss_Domain
Doss_DomainLv12yr
2022-08-30 11:06

Good story, good character concepts, good fantasy world with deep trivia and lore. I guess the "stability of updates" would be the only issue here. So there's where you lose 0.2 stars. Sorry. 🥲

One One One

Distil
4.2
23 Chs

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Iceferno
IcefernoLv1

LOVED every aspect about this tale, bruv. Already at the edge of my seat for wanting to know what happens next! I love the idea that you're planning to turn this into an anime adaptation. Would be cool, I bet.

2yr

MuxBD
MuxBDLv1

Excellent! I'll take back what I said previously about the lack of updates. 😅 Keep it up, Dewan Mukto! 👍 Waiting for this chapter's ending plus the next!

2yr
Noble_Of_Sugar
Noble_Of_SugarLv1

I love the Alkynes! (I have read the early manuscripts of this book on the Mux Anime websites) Great to see that the author has now published the story on Webnovel! All the best.

2yr
Sockar
SockarLv1

Unlike the other fantasy novels on this platform, your one seems a bit unique I'd say. I would've rated a 4.8 or 4.6 but since this story isn't complete yet, I shouldn't be judging it too poorly. Here's a 5.0 from me, mate. Use it well!

2yr
GreenShirtGang
GreenShirtGangLv1

People like you don't deserve to live. Get lost from Webnovel! This is a platform for professional writers NOT amatuers or hobbyists! Hope this lesson serves you right. 🕛

2yr
GE17
GE17Lv1

I'd say everything about this novel is OK. Just OK. Not too good nor too bad. Needs more effort in attracting new readers. Don't get too excited just because you see thousands of views on your stories. Not everyone is destined to be writer. Remember that.

2yr
FrackerNET
FrackerNETLv1

Needs more work on designing characters properly. Half of them described so far seem like edgy anime side characters. The world seems overcomplicated. Good luck trying to impress more than a 100 people with this. It's good, but not good enough.

2yr
MuxBD
MuxBDLv1

I'd say, I'm looking forward to the anime adaptation of this novel in the forseeable future. So I'll be happy to provide every ounce of support! Cheers.

2yr
MuxLikesCars
MuxLikesCarsLv1

Your writing is perfect. Updating schedule SUCKS! Story, characters and world seem OK. Anyways continue adding more chapters for freaking God's sake!

2yr
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