Hi everyone, this is my first novel so... may be it's have so many mistake or something unlogic. Yeah, I know that and I'm working hard to correcting them. Please... keep supporing me and leave the comment, I will fix it immediatly. ^^ (Don't quit this book just read 30 first chapters ._. )

if you don't like an Idiot MC, this isn't for you. unnecessary redundant words, inconsistency (on names or number), lack of details on some skills or explanations. stupid mc(need to be said twice), author trying to be mysterious with the plot but did it in a bad way resulting in forced plot. this feels like reading a draft rather than novel. read first 10 chapters, you'll know what I feel. author/TL really need to rewrite the entire novel to make it more interesting. if you guys know a novel where the mc got a skill that give him x1000 rewards, this novel feels the same. both done in a bad way

gonna be honest i gave it a try read till the paywall came and most of the story was so random . in my eys dumb mc enmys too lucky and only focused with mc .

writing quality (4/5): it is very readable and has good grammer. story development (1/5): the amount of inconsistencies is enough for so many people, including me, to just drop this out of frustration. character design (2,5/5): not amazing but not as dumb as most mass transmigration/lord novels. updating stability (4/5): good, nothing really to say about it. world background (2/5): also a lot of inconsistencies.

a character with 50 base stat can kill a ur with 2.5k stats (not even injured). suxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsux

In the first time i though there will be OP MC trashing everyone around him but, fortunately it wasn't, even though in the beginning MC seems like OP since many people with much powerful than him appear it doesn't seem like he too OP. So yeah it was good novel to read. I kinda waiting for how MC develop his romance

this is a type of novel i would not recommend you guys to start reading now, let it have more than 200 chapters then you should start reading or else you will get frustrated like fr, like i am right now, not bas read if you can ignore the thicc plot armour for the real mc of this story.

Someone tell me this gets better because the grammar is really rough, the story and characters are insanely inconsistent and the author cant do basic math. I'm really contemplating dropping this Though I love the story idea And the system, the inconsistencies and forced plot is making it hard not to.

Everyone is just a pawn of op beings that groom their chosen person and change their nature. Even the MC’s ppl/summons do stuff behind his back.

Novel is good though inconsistent and the mc acts like a moron a lot but in my opinion I don’t think it is good enough to spend money on