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RaAvim
RaAvimLv142yr
2022-09-12 00:33

Really good story concept and development. So far the mixture of modern, cultivation, and horror/thriller is keeping me engaged. Some of the side characters need additional character development but since I am early in the story, I am hopeful. The MC is well formed and doesn’t act unreasonable in his circumstances.

Spirit Realm Walker

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4.6
40 Chs

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RR_KK
RR_KKLv1

Random review from like 20 chapters in at 1 am. This is from reading the raw like a month ago so, y'know. Grain of salt. So basically there's this dude who has this ability to send himself into seizures. Cool. What I wouldn't give for that. There's a twist though. He basically can remember everything. So yeah, superpower. He's got some fun blue pills or something for that. Anyway his close friend dies or something and sends him this super secret card to a super secret supernatural game called... I forget. That's not important. What is important is that he travels to this S - Rank realm, where if he can complete it, he'll get the amazing occupation of "Night Walker." But boo hoo. S rank realm is so hard that literally no one has cleared it before. So mc goes to the (probably) Chinese officials. They accept him since he can get amazing job, pull some yarn, maybe worship a bust of Mao, and get him his information. Some things happen here and there and he winds up clearing the super tough secret realm in 2 days. Yay. Storytelling at its finest. It's worth mentioning that the dungeon was based around this tunnel. Why? Because the mc literally leaves that tunnel as soon as the dungeon starts. He never goes back. Ok... why's that a problem? Well... I wanted to know what was in the tunnel. That's pretty much it. Just kinda disappointing. After all, one of the missions he had for the dungeon was "fully explore the area," and mc completes it without going back to that tunnel. Oh, and the mc also has a step sister who's uber hot or something. Also every female in his work building also just happen to be uber hot too. Also there's a dungeon where you literally just have 🍆🍑 the whole time. Also a past Night Walker got yoinked from the mc's colleagues before by a uber hot girl from another department. Also the mc woke up a uber beautiful goddess that smiled at him from inside a coffin. Uhhhhhhhhhhhh I'm not sure, but I think the author's lonely. So yeah. It's good I guess.

2yr

Young_fruit_Smiley
Young_fruit_SmileyLv14

At least Translation deserves 5 ⭐ . Author: Xiao Langjun 340+ chapters available Start is good..... Mc has a ability not too op but still can become op if developed properly.... . The most important part is that mc is not brain dead.... only for this point, I'll recommend it .... . plot has mystery, horror to it & mc is a virgin but not simp.... good enough ☺️ . world background is still developing & character development is nice . Short Title:SW Alternate Title:灵境行者 ..... but mtl is bad : as 😞 he/she is problem regular in it but many other problems like idioms, jokes & comedy is lost in machine translation...... . but kudos to the translator for good translation on this site...... .

2yr
Tony_Defett
Tony_DefettLv2

Much better than other releases this week.... Character has an actual development. The story has an actual plot.... . vote for it.... !!!😂🤣

2yr
uflesh940
uflesh940Lv3

It's decent, but it failed to really draw me in. Classic "hidden supernatural world" novel except boring. Or maybe just very slow to start - the MC has yet to earn any moral value points, unlock his class, or even level up. (I dropped this at chapter 20.)

2yr
legendary_awesome
legendary_awesomeLv11

It's a good book, but notnoty cup of tea, but if you enjoy a good stories with a bit of mysteries and a little bit of nationalism this is for you.

2yr
Black_lotus_2004
Black_lotus_2004Lv14

I don't understand the readers of this platform. They keep complaining about trash, copy paste novels but won't ever read a book with some fresh concept. It has the least views currently, which is very disappointing considering how interesting this book is.

2yr
00_luminious
00_luminiousLv2

so I came here from mtl.... & mtl is trash compared to this translation. ...........…....………………………………….......................…………………..........

2yr
Tom_Harley
Tom_HarleyLv2

Someone recommend this to me..... Finally a book worth reading 😊 I am not into reviews so- hshshshxhdhshshzhxdhhsyshshzshxhhddghxyxydydxhhdyxhsheussiskxhuxhehxhehduzhshehduxduhehxhduxudhdhxhdhdhhd

2yr
Jeff_Bezos_5662
Jeff_Bezos_5662Lv2

awesome book 📚 & plot I rarely give review 😄 I want to to be selected so I decided to try giving it. finally a good book Much better than other releases this week... vote

2yr
angduby
angdubyLv14

I really live this book. it is unique and greatly written. .................................................... ...........................

2yr
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