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Kiiiddd
KiiidddLv142yr
2022-10-28 05:20

Starts out good but slowly getting worse. Not sure how much research the author has done but either tons other Fan-Fics are wrong or the author gets a fair bit wrong. Like I get AU but without a reason or acknowledgment it comes across as just a mistake

Swordsman System In Naruto

Mathematical_Pi
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84 Chs

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Mathematical_Pi
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1. The story does not have harem 2. No hardcore romance 3. The protagonist has a system but still does the grind 4. Please do a review after you read the story otherwise....

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Lance_
Lance_Lv3

Good so far, but hard to think even with 18% of Benimaru combat ability he can't take on 7 Genins.

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maou_diablo1911
maou_diablo1911Lv4

The start of this novel was good. But as it went on and on I felt myself not liking it more and more, and now at chap 24 I have given up on it. I think the author did not research the character of sakumo before writing this. He is shown sometimes silly, sometimes ruthless and sometimes even incompetent as a ninja. I get that the author is trying to justify the person of cannon kakashi by making it such that it looks like it came from sakumo but that was not the case, his lazy, carefree, treating everyone as a child was a way of coping with all the trauma he went through. Another thing is the reincarnation aspect of the mc, never it was used apart from the starting chapter. The only good thing about this novel for me was the grammar. It was much better than what we see on this website, but in the end grammar can only take you so long.

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the story is very good but this is not suitable for me, well that's all ......................................................................................................................................................................

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