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xevers
xeversLv12yr
2022-10-10 17:16

this novel is good but he gets too much stuff from china and how he explains the origin of chinese nonsense. maybe you don't realize that this novel contains little by little chinese nonsense. that's why people still read this fanfic but next chapter he will stay behind the scenes and use many items or characters from china that we don't know. the stupidest when he mixed the story of the origin of the stuff he got from china in marvel and that was too annoying. if you notice this fanfic has no marvel elements and the timeline is messed up. In conclusion, this fanfic novel has more external elements than Marvel, especially China as he introduced and told the background of chinese characters from penglai and so on, he didn't tell other characters where their origins are from like kaito kid and every chinese fictional will introduce their food because they don't know much western food and that's how they make western fanfic. if mc is in marvel bring many elements originally from Marvel and not from the elements of the writer's life habits in China

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swaran
swaranLv5

Very simple reason because it's not his original novel but a chinese novel which he is translating, you can find the original novel in "novelmtl.com" with the same name

Godkiller04
Godkiller04Lv13

Is this Harem ???

swaran:Very simple reason because it's not his original novel but a chinese novel which he is translating, you can find the original novel in "novelmtl.com" with the same name
Xnij
XnijLv1

Parou de traduzir então? Não saí mais.

swaran:Very simple reason because it's not his original novel but a chinese novel which he is translating, you can find the original novel in "novelmtl.com" with the same name
quiler
quilerLv15

Should have known when I saw what other books he’s done….good thing I didn’t start yet

swaran:Very simple reason because it's not his original novel but a chinese novel which he is translating, you can find the original novel in "novelmtl.com" with the same name
Harem_police
Harem_policeLv14

harem enjoyer spotted:

Godkiller04:Is this Harem ???
Godkiller04
Godkiller04Lv13

He doesn't have the ability to accept me

Harem_police:harem enjoyer spotted:
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Harem_police
Harem_policeLv14

your right, he wanted to do the smiting personally

Godkiller04:He doesn't have the ability to accept me
Godkiller04
Godkiller04Lv13

Even his dad doesn't have ability to smite me.

Harem_police:your right, he wanted to do the smiting personally
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gustavo_hhhhdsd
gustavo_hhhhdsdLv1

mas devo dizer que o começo é muito bom, mas a frente fica meio chato admito, li até o 400 e pouco no mtl, até o 300 dava para levar, depois perdi a vontade de continuar.

quiler:Should have known when I saw what other books he’s done….good thing I didn’t start yet
Carlister_Marcos_5593
Carlister_Marcos_5593Lv11

haha even the plot is classical Chinese' faceslapping shitty move...

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