The story flows really well with the use of many descriptive words to help readers picture in their mind multiple scenes within a certain part. The ‘Status’ looks phenomenal with great layering out. The character interaction is amazing as it is my first time seeing such a writer being nitty gritty towards their writing. I will give this a 4.4/5 for great effort.
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