A good story, though a bit lackluster for the beginning. Giving the MC the same starting point as the Slime, also having great sage and devour type skills. Though the MC takes a different path (Killing Veldora and saving the Oni), it still seems forced in a way to follow the Original path of the Story the Fanfiction is based on. Be it naming others the same, even though mc doesn't seem to know the Anime or manga. Same thing seems to happen with meeting the Goblins or the Wolves and making them his followers. What also bothers me a bit is that the Great Sage has no special markings, so you weren't realizing it was talking from time to time. Lastly the entire Shiva stuff seems interesting and a nice influence for shaping the MC powers. Even though for me, the story has some things that bother me, it's still a great fanfiction. I am interested where it will go. Anyway 4 stars from me!
TheKhorne
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