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DICKY_MAULANALv12yr
2022-07-04 09:16

I appreciate your work and even though there are some that are not according to my personal wishes, but I will still rate this as good enough. . keep it up author....

Douluo Spirit Bead Sword

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4.5
63 Chs

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PHPprogrammer
PHPprogrammerLv1

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2yr

DAOIST_SUPREME
DAOIST_SUPREMELv4

Raw plsssss .

2yr
Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

This MC is clearly against "spirit hall" which goes against what I'm looking for, I really dislike Tang San and his Master, he destroys the killing capital and spirit hall, which plunges the continent into chaos, also in the manga Tang San is the character I hate the most (those who read it understand, Tang San becomes the most disgusting main character I know). In this fanfic this MC does not seem to think about the future and the good of all people, therefore it does not align with my search for entertainment, I will give 5 stars for taking the time to translate but I will not continue reading

2yr
TinyStitch
TinyStitchLv5

To be honest, most aspects of the novel are done well. The only big issue is the grammer. It constantly changes from he to she, as well as a very weird use of punctuation to the point where it feels like words, or even whole sentences are missing. I can’t really comment much on update stability since the person who put this up isn’t the original author, but i suspect the updates to come in randomly with no real schedule as well. If you can handle the grammer issues and the fact that there won’t be much updates if any then the aren’t any other issues

2yr
Malikim
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Belfeghor
BelfeghorLv4

Link on raw or mlt ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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SAGE
SAGELv2

that's a dirty move you did it in the last chapter, why you'd have to stop on that point I need the next chapter but, the novel is good if I had an issue it will be all Chinese names on the novel but that isn't the author fault after all the Douluo series is Chinese

2yr
zebas8297
zebas8297Lv11

En serio muy buen Fanfic, podrias decirme el nombre original ( en chino ) o pasar el link donde lo lees para leer los raws y no quedarme con la duda

2yr
Wolfsword
WolfswordLv5

Honestly really good story love everything story development-wise also because you didn't just make the mc overpowered from the start they have to work their way to it which is a nice touch. Sadly though I won't be continuing to read the story because of the grammar issue all over the story like constantly interchanging he and her. As well as other small mistakes like that happening often throughout the story in the thirty chapters I have read so far.

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