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KhaiBest
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2022-06-11 06:00

the description makes me think of the mc fighting other protagonists with different tropes which i love! ..............................................................................

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Davros92
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The description makes me think of the clue game, not the game but the board itself. When you open the box not knowing what it is and there are a bunch of cards and random parts of the weapons and parts. The author is like the guy who brought the game. He knows the rules and can explain it to you in a way that all those pieces make sense or he can fail miserably and ruin the whole experience.

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GrandpaPeng
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Finished the novel. MC's space reminds me of Lord of Mysteries and Museum of Deadly Beasts. It's fast paced for people who like blood rushing vibes. Was quite a good mystery & investigation & undercover & battle novel up to some point, even though MC was full of godlike cheats (they are explained at the very end). The novel started detoriating real fast once the plot of eastern jurisdiction was over. The novel can be said to be good mostly up to this point. In final notes, author admits that ,,it collapsed in the middle and late stages, which also greatly affected my creative passion and confidence" as well as ,,the more I write, the less I feel". After the plot of eastern jurisdiction, the chapters are a mess, everything feels so rushed and braindead, author skips many interesting and possible plots and dealings with characters, ugh, it's very anti-climatic. As for MC himself: he is not that likeable. Quite a psycho with twisted morality, lots of abilities are very dark. With all the cheats and power he has, he definitely didn't need to bloodbath so many characters, or when he knew the truth, he could just drop his petty reasoning at getting at them. And he sure is greedy for women... I have just learnt that one of the author's older books is actually "I'll Add Points to All Things". I digged into it years ago, and completely dropped at chapter 297. It was worse than current novel, it had promising start, but as far as I can remember it collapsed much earlier, while psycho MC among other things like rac... killed it. Anyway, have fun reading!

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