Author, with MCs monologues etc., insists making MC seem like a good person, when the person in question left his terminally ill mom with his f'ed up family, in favor of 'guiding' (or let's be honest, he just wants to go on adventures), Sanji, when Sanji himself would've been fine having escaped alone. He's perfectly capable of helping a character ease her pain, or at least be beside her throughout the process, but still chose to leave her to her destiny. This is what plagues most garbage-rated works on this site - Moral inconsistency. These Authors don't know how to properly convey a character's moral compass in a way that's organic, so they supplement it with monologue, etc. instead of actions. It's poor story telling, leading to a disconnect between how the author views their character and how the reader sees them. It's one of the most st-upid, very-in-your-face, mistakes an author can make.
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