Item: Atlantis: The Twilight of the gods [BL]
Rating: 4.6

Beast_BLv151yr

2023-04-11 00:04

Amazing story from beginning to end, I simply couldn’t put it down. Everything had a purpose and everything flowed perfectly. I wasn’t expecting the story to be what it was based on the cover and description but I’m glad I took the chance. Only criticism I have is that there were a lot of typos and name mix-ups that could have been easily remedied with a good proofreading, even so the mistakes that were there weren’t bad enough to take away from the story. Besides that I genuinely enjoyed the characters, the world, the theology, the plot, and the twists and turns here and there, I wish we got more. Thankyou for this book, it definitely deserves more attention then it gets.

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