Review Detail of GREAT in Paladin-X

Wow, what a nice concept. Seriously, I was hooked by the prologue itself, and the 3rd chapter was the cream on top the cherry. You're doing a good job though. Writing quality is excellent, really. There's a lot of elements from Mech Touch here and I kinda like it, author, just try to add a bit of originality to it. As for the paladin project, it reminds me of avatar 2009, seriously, I'm hooked. I definitely recommend this.