Review Detail of steph_pesi in The lightning Descendant

An enjoyable read since I love superheroes and I can't wait to read the other chapters. I personally would describe more and use less sound effects like the 'woosh' and all that. It had more of a comical effect and made me laugh when the mood and tone was serious. I know. I'm unique 😂😂😂. It's just like a comic book without pictures. I'd love to read the comic if you make one. Then again really good.