Not sure why this has such a high rating... It's not a 1 star story but it's definitely not a 5 star one either. After rating everything else I'd give it around 3-3.5 stars mostly because of the character design and grammar. Writing quality: The author is either ESL (English second language) or is just really bad at grammar. It feels like a lot of paragraphs have been shoved into a google translate blender to come out as almost gibberish. Their favorite words/phrases also seem to be 'suddenly, immediately and out of nowhere' to the point that they are shoved into every other paragraph even if they don't make sense. They'd be better off if they just removed them entirely from their vocabulary rather than every single action happening 'suddenly'. Stability of update: No real context but considering a chapter was 'it wasn't dropped' and it's 50 chapters over the course of 7 months with sporadic updates I'll at least give it 4 stars here Story development: They gave a warning that the character was going to avoid using their system. Which is fine so long as they actually have a good reason to do so. But the reason in the story is so forced that it's a good marking point of when the story starts going downhill fast which isn't saying much since the story was already fairly average until then with the only real good part being the interesting system. There's little to no real story besides that, the mc has no goals or real purpose so everything is just him being forced to go around fighting all the while the mc is constantly complaining so there isn't enough to even really review. Character design: This is one of the main downsides of the story. The Author for some reason made an entirely unlikable main character. They have no drive, no goals they don't even have much of a personality besides being a lazy moron that's very strong, they have no reason to do anything making every chapter just comprise of them constantly complaining while doing things and acting like an idiot despite having something that's supposed to help their ability to think. The author also keeps trying to make dumb jokes that aren't that funny with cows and other jokes at the mc's expense when he's not a very likable character. It also seems like they are drinking the batman coolaid about the no killing thing. Which is always disappointing to see in characters, I don't need a psychopathic murderer but that and capital punishment when you can only gain are two entirely different things. World background: It's a ff and It doesn't really expand on the original world or add anything interesting. If anything someone that's never read/watched one piece before would be very confused reading this story.
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Thanks man i was really looking forward to this ff and after knowing that the mc is lazy guy with no drive or purpose I decided to not read it..anyway thanks for saving ma time...
