Review Detail of Stellar08 in Reincarnated as an Archangel in the Omniverse

the incongruity of his age to his actions and specially the reactions of the people around him is what held this fic back for me. people might think it's a minor thing but when it doesn't affect perceptions of the characters when it's supposed to be, then there's something wrong with it. I read your previous fics and relatively enjoyed it, but somehow because of that detail it affects everything in the story...