Review Detail of FrankJack in Dimensional Group Chat as the Sorcerer Supreme (A Non-Harem Fan-Fic.)

I like the idea, but you suck at making it happen. I love the no harem part, (can’t even find a story without one) Grammar is nice too. The only thing I dislike is world building and story telling. You’re awful at it. I thought it was going to be a simple reincarnation story, wrong! It’s just a jumble of plot lines, completely messy and unorganized. I’m not reading this.