Review Detail of CopyPaste1 in Dimensional Group Chat as the Sorcerer Supreme (A Non-Harem Fan-Fic.)

The idea and the plot is really good. but the grammar is a mess and you can see the Author has some problems to express himself. If he can find a editor this work gonna be much better. right now is 3.5 stars but i gave 4 cause Mc is op but not arrogant he protect his faction and humans and he has smart and chill vibes. Just ya know, the grammar and dialogues need work especially when Author trying to skip skins!