Plz no harem... I mean Geralt didn't get it so why MC? ....................................................................................................................................................

Annoyingly decent is a great way to describe this book. The constant contradictions in character and overall logic absolutely ruin the atmosphere of the Witcher universe and this book as a whole(He almost loses in a sword fight to some arrogant prince because, in the authors eyes, "nobodies perfect" while trying to make him more human. Which sure, i agree no ones perfect, but he is a WITCHER not a human, he will hear and smell the guard behind him(in full metal plate might i add, very loud btw) before he goes to attack him. Dialogue and personality of the MC is mundane and forced (robotic) so theres not much going for character development. Some issues with grammar here and there but its still very good, especially when it's not the authors first language which i was impressed with. Author also can't take criticism to save his life, making commenting trying to help with absolutely stupid decisions or dialogue tiring ,when you are an invested reader trying to help them improve.

I don't really know nothing about the Witcher, so I'm asking this, what's the storyline here ? It's start from the Witcher 1 or 2 or 3 ? I'm asking this cuz there is a channel on YouTube(Game Movie Land) where they make movies from a game. So if you guide me, I'm going to see it first on YouTube and then read the fanfic. Giving 5 stars, this is new on this site. Don't make it harem please, we are tired of that ****, it's everywhere …

This is an incredibly frustrating read. I can see the authors ideas and the way he wants to shape the story but the writing is just not good enough. The conversations feel awkward, there are a lot of errors in grammar and the overall feel of the characters is just that bit "off". It always teeters on the edge of being a good read but never actually quite manages to get there. I commend you for trying to make the mc an actual child but I think you bit of more than you can chew. Its like you have all the right building blocks for a child mc but you fail at putting them together in a way thats realistic or at the very least presentable.

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Really enjoyed the old story so might as well get this started with a good old review. Keep up the good work author friend, are you keeping the same story ark or will this be a complete rewrite?

Atmosphere is a bit depressed, but characters and world are really amazing .

loving it so far, I've been looking for a decent witcher fanfic for over a year. since "alan: tale of orgin blood was dropped. you're doing really well so far, the story is smooth and the character design is great. I would love to see in depth writing about alchemy and magic arts, maybe meditation/cultivation. would love for more oc's eventually and I can't wait for the mc to interact with dandelion. I do have a question if you have a possible love interest in mind all ready like triss or a completely new character. I really love the book so far, keep up the great work author. can't wait for more. I wish you health.

Great story so far. Looking forward for more. It-s rare to find a Witcher story so that s'a bonus too. ------------------------------------------------------------------------