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2022-09-15 17:36

The story ,although I am alright with the primary summary and plot at the start, the mc just bothers me a bit. . He's strong I get it and his reason to become a lord under the starks is somewhat understandable but what I don't get is that even though he has that reason, he just do things on his own like that "Wiping out the bolton incident" and only sending a letter to the Starks ,halfway on their journey to the bolton lands. and now at the latest chapter with him complaining to his liegelord about his problem with Lys and it being a bedslave factory is a great offence to him, I mean what does the North have to care bout another continents matter just because he bring that issue up? ? will he wipe out Lys just like the Bolton's?? if that's the case might as well he never became a lord under the starks to begin with. my point is that the drama of the story is just too overrated and unnecessary that it affects the reading experience. don't care if you complain about another whining reader as another update chapter but please consider the direction of the plot and if it will add up to the story and not just sound like .....cheesy drama?

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mind you ,this is after five months after my initial review of the story so this review did not just pop up because I just read bits and pieces of the story when in fact I stayed updated on this story just to observe the plot of the story

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