Item: The Rich Young Lady Destroyed Her Dream Girl Script
Rating: 3.4

Justfor_Reading_4938Lv12yr

2022-07-07 20:33

The plot is good, the pace of the story is good. Although there are many others of this genre, this one is better than most. A reborn FL (she had dreamt her past life while in hospital, and knew that it's a novel world) vs a FL with a cheat system. The system is not the all knowing, very helpful kind that we see in other novels. ML is very good too. I only have problem with the translation. It's not much better than google translate or other MTL sites. This books needs an editor. ASAP.

The Rich Young Lady Destroyed Her Dream Girl Script

Yijie Jingfu

4.3

563 Chs

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