Item: Marvel X DC: The Vongola Family
Rating: 1

KnivedLv102yr

2022-09-05 22:50

Super generic Chinese infested fanfic, Chinese people just dont know how to write good stories it seems they all feels the same no matter what gener. The plot is all over the place and its riddled with holes.

Marvel X DC: The Vongola Family

ZaHacker

4.5

108 Chs

Liked by 2 people

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