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Excavelier
ExcavelierLv32yr
2022-03-26 02:12

Lez gon! A KHR Fic! jsususudhddhdh,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,nj,.,j,.,k.,k,.,k,m,kx.,ks zk.,sk.,ks.,kz.,

Marvel X DC: The Vongola Family

ZaHacker
4.5
108 Chs

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Eid_zack
Eid_zackLv4

urmm khr? what's that

2yr
skiptail
skiptailLv4

Katekyo hitman reborn

Eid_zack:urmm khr? what's that
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ZaHacker
ZaHackerAuthor

Shameless author review 5 star review. And please point out some of my mistakes and please give some criticism so I can improve the story and my translation skills.

2yr

Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv12

The fanfic is not bad, but we have some problems in the translation, mainly in some terms referring to KHR that the translator needs to correct before I give 5 stars. I'm a little used to MTL so I can enjoy reading even with these terms mistranslated, but I must admit that this certainly turns off many readers and would be a much more enjoyable read without this problem. Apart from that, we have other small problems in the translation that are easily acceptable and ignored when considering that it's a fanfic and it's free. I think it's a good place for the translator to hone his skills and I'm not going to drop stars for that. The fanfic itself is very good so far, despite being a Chinese fanfic it's not full of the nasty wuxia and xianxia cliches that these fanfics usually have and that's a big plus point. It's an enjoyable read and I recommend everyone to give it a try.

2yr
Viperino
ViperinoLv3

its a great idea, but the writing need improvement. dialogue doesnt really make sense for the characters espcially when u consider age and circumstances, characters also feels shallow. flesh it out more and it'll be great.

2yr
ZephyrZero
ZephyrZeroLv6

The pacing is good but the translation of the Reborn items are a bit off. It destroys the immersion because you'll be thinking what the is the mc talking about but, There's few Reborn fanfic so that's something to look forward to. Can't really give a high valuation of the character design and world as this is a fanfic.

2yr
Project_Traveler
Project_TravelerLv14

just found this novel ........ feeling good about this novel . . . . . . . . . . . .. . .. . .... . . . . . . .. . . . m m m m m . . . ... . . . .... .. . . . ... .... .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

2yr
Knived
KnivedLv10

Super generic Chinese infested fanfic, Chinese people just dont know how to write good stories it seems they all feels the same no matter what gener. The plot is all over the place and its riddled with holes.

2yr
Hajiko
HajikoLv14

Great story were one transmigrate to mavel world mixed with DC and gets a System were he needs to create his own vongola Familia only sadd thing is that the Original is on Hitarus after chapter 127

2yr
Tennouji_Kotarou
Tennouji_KotarouLv4

Katekyo Hitman Reborn deserves all the stars possible. The work is using a very interesting KHR system, I'm really looking forward to seeing this amazing series gain more views.

2yr
Futile_Dream
Futile_DreamLv4

I... loved the title.. that I subconsciously smiled.. I thought maybe... just maybe.. this one is different cause I.. Ive read too much marvel fanfics that I almost forgot the original story... Theres too much.. Naruto, Phantom Kid, Bleach, A Father, His girlfriend is either God king Hela or one of the most famous ones, Transformer combined with the first one, A broadcasting system, And many more.. And if by chance anyone knows a marvel fanfic (cause I know someone must have read more than me).. can you recommend it to me?

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