Review Detail of heli in The Extra's Return

the quality is not that bad, but the development of the story as some issues, its like you wanting to watch john wick, with all the anger, intense feeling that comes with it and dind out that the john wick character is being played by mr bean. despite mr bean being a good charcter or actor it definitely does not suite a movie like john wick. that is what the author is trying to do, i got to chapter 29 and i am just forced to write a review, the fighging sequences are not good enough, what was said about some characters at the beginning of the chapters do not blend with them 10 or so chapters later. the mc seems to talk to himself or monologue but the author tends to use that to repeat the same thing by explaining again in a first person perspective. the more i read the more points drop for the review. if only author can reread what they wrote.