I'll humbly take the Shameless 5-star review express ticket. Let me introduce myself. I'm sleepingwaters, a kind but overly humble person if you know me. Inspiring to become a author of many books someday, sleepingwaters is a name that I imagined to be serene and kind. This is my first fanfiction. Tbh, don't get your hopes up since I'm still new to this. I'll just tell you guys some plans I wanted to share. First, I would want to gather all my fans and readers who enjoyed reading my art in a platform that we all communicate and share our thoughts, and I plant to do that in Discord soon. Welp, that's all thank you.... HAHAHAHAHAH seriously tho, that's just my plan ATM.welp, enjoy your day and God bless 🙏

Impressive. Good everything. love the pokemon theme, new everything. good job power to you. good good. also, hope there would be more scenes for diantha

writing is bad, full of typos and pharagraph written in a extremely strange way. other thing is how he dont edit even when it's other show where he is wrong, he even write mc first description wrong change later but dont edit. the pace of the fic is completely messed up too simple because author want to give a dark outlook to the fic and completely mess up the fic(at least for me). he first show he will be focusing on mc gain basic strength to become a rookie trainer and the knowledge but he suddenly grow all this to the trash by having the bad guy traumatized the mc and and make the story more edgy and angst

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I won't be unfair with rating this story even though i didn't really appreciate its direction as much, character design is the only one in which i ranked a 2 out of 5, and that is due to the MC acting more like a regular child would instead of a reincarnated person trying to act like one. That is one of the reasons i decided to drop this and as well as the pokemon talent thing it feels too wuxia for my taste with improving pokemon talent ranks and stuff i never really liked the pokemon fanfics that involved those. Now onto the other part i don't get why he developed such a quick relationship with his parents on just being there for a few days unless i guess he absorbed all of the bodies memories before appearing which i'd get but thats where the part of him acting way too childish, it just feels like a regular child and not a reincarnater trying to ACT like one. Using the excuse that he was a previous orphan might help a little since i'm going to assume he always wanted parental figures but it was never really explained if he assimulated with the memories or not(atleast in the early chapters) IMO he should still be disoriented from being reincarnated as even though he was a orphan and wanted parental figures he suddenly got yeeted out of his home world into this one and in the chapter it looks as if he had just arrived(it took the author explaining to me that he had actually been there for a few days for me to that part) .OR IM JUST DUMB AND I COMPLETELY MISSED THAT PART ENTIRELY. Anyway those two are the main reasons that i decided to drop the story as everything else doesn't seem that bad aside from the few gramatical mistakes that can easily be fixed by proof-reading.

Quite intriguing and interesting this book has been especially with there being a young Diantha and how the OC is more powerful than her while they are all young not just that but how she hasn't been able to beat him and his magby wonder how strong they'll be in the future once Ash begins his journey look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on

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