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JxstASyko
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Only 22 chaps in but stuff feels rushed and there are random jumps in between words. The grammar isn’t the best but it’ getting better as the story progressess. It’s a good book but there is a lot of stuff that needs improvement. Other than that no more complaints

My Godly Ascension

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it is my first book and like you said there will be a lot of visible improvement in the story and writing. i will do my best so keep supporting. Thank you.