Although I have read many reincarnation stories this one seems a bit different. It have a lot of potential but it will be great if the author just went through and fix the little mistakes in the sentences. Anyhow that doesn't mean the story is bad. It was perfectly fine and it keeps anyone engaged. Story development is OK. The loving charecter suddenly getting changed into a pervy one is little bit of irritation for me but still the book is worth a try. Keep it up author let your story influence many as possible.
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