Review Detail of Mel_Aniv in My Godly Ascension

This novel has the potential I must say. I can sense the passion of the author in his creation. Though it was still not in its perfect form yet and has to be improved. But don't fret! You will improve in just a whim, you won't notice it. As I observe, you need to practice the flow of narration. World-building is solid and is its core. As for the character interactions, they were cheeky and wholesome. I can see myself when I am still beginning to write haha 😂 Good luck with your journey! All the best 👍