Review Detail of TFH in Lord of Dreams - A Multiverse Fanfiction

It's very good, the grammar is excellent with few mistakes here and there. The updates are on the slow side so that's sad as the novel is quite good. The first 15 or so chapters are very needy to read the introduction to things since the powers of MC are control DREAMS and REALITY, he can do whatever he wants but its costs energy, and he started weak, barely a few times stronger than the regular human, so no wishing for Excalibur just yet, as the more powerful the wish is, the more energy needed if it exceeds his capacity, nothing happens.*****I like the way things are going. /////// My only worry is that the author said that romance and hârêm will be secondary... That's not a good thing romance, especially in a hârêm is a very important aspect, since if done wrong, it will just be another trash hârêm. The girl's personalities must be flushed out, the relationship must be developed, their interests be shown, etc. As each person is unique, with personal likes and dislikes, even more so hârêm as its the focus, since the girls must also get along. It's also important to improve the girls so that they get stronger, smarter, etc... It's fine for temporary side characters to not be developed as much as we will not be seen them again, like his swordsmanship instructor. But the hârêm will follow MC to the end and very likely participate in the war... For now its unknown if there will be male companions or not.