Keep up the good work, big fan of your novels especially The Bored Immortal! One thing i would suggest is more character development and dialouge between characters even if it streatches the novel or chapter a bit.
Thank you so much for the support 😊🥰 I often thought I include too many dialogues and that is why I sometimes consciously reduce them. But no worries, I am still in the process of making my novels better [img=recommend]