I liked your other book and if you say you became better I'm very hopeful about this, also i like what you plan to do white this fic. Room, shambles

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The story is interesting since the MC comes from the Nara clan. My only opinion is that currently the MC is to battle oriented while the template itself for Law is that he's a doctor, so i hope the MC become more knowledgeable in healing ninjutsu and not to arrogant (since currently the following chapter the MC are to arrogrant) and can be low down a bit or explain to other character why he behave like that. Other that than it's good. I hope in seeing more update and the progress of the story

I like what you did. But there is no fanfic of boruto because the serie is garbage and a waste of time compared to Naruto... But i love your history.

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I thought the plot was interesting and the story is decent. unique enough to catch my interest and Boruto hasn't been fleshed out much in fanfics. The story hits a snag with the MCs personality. He's a really bad brother and it just leaves a bad taste in your mouth. it might be done as some kind of comic relief but it falls terribly flat. It doesn't make sense either because only a neglected, self absorbed child would act that way, thats not normal brother dynamic, and he hasn't been mistreated. there are holes in the story already but that can be overlooked honestly. Also, the MC seems a bit arrogant and too sure of himself as well. Killing tigers without a second thought, days after showing up in that world. and how can a Wooden training sword channel and project Chakra without at least exploding?

it's quite good but it's still at the start so I can't really say much

So, updates are rare, but the plot is interesting. The characters aren't particularly revealed, but that's not what I'm here. The world is only conoha, nothing more. Errors... Couple

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