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Pacifist_Warrior
Pacifist_WarriorLv42yr
2022-08-09 16:20

I will say everything that is in this ff so far .. there's forceful slave system with slave mc ..mc use clones to have segs with himself and also his harem .. mc r*pe female characters because system force him to but that makes it more worse .. slave system uses impossible mission ... so far Im disappointed author it starts good but you ruined it

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Horny_Gentleman
3.9
52 Chs

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Mark_Dens
Mark_DensLv3

Somehow it got me interested, I'm not one of those hypocrites saying it's weird or the author is sick fxxk. I myself once actually already think about it when I'm young so in not that disturbed. I also like how it's a very "unique one of a kind I may say. All in all my opinion is It's not for everyone but for someone who has an open mind. As for doing it with your clone, I think a water clone is better for that so you won't get its memories. And my opinion for the clones doing it with your girls I don't really mind it for the reason in my opinion that thing is like getting jealous of a d**do with your name on it. So that is my heartfelt review.

2yr

Kobeni
KobeniLv3

8/10 could have a better ending in my opinion, but overall it's pretty decent, it has some funny and embarrassing moments. It also has risque parts that I liked and it depends on your taste if you like it or not

1yr
FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

If you enjoy the idea of plowing and getting plowed by yourself, this is the story for you. Not for me though thanks. This is yet another reason to hate shadow clones.

2yr
Vincent_Kun
Vincent_KunLv4

Guy kept banging his clones ayooo .................................................................................................

2yr
LuminouShadow
LuminouShadowLv4

Interesting indeed. Though he fu**ed his own clone. Let that sink in... It's wrong in so many levels. smh. and shouldn't even work. But interesting nonetheless.

2yr
Darkstel
DarkstelLv1

Initially, it looked like a story with great potential and a desire to register a character who achieves everything on his own, but....I've lost potential since the sixth chapter. You made a stupid surprise author.

2yr
Darktokio
DarktokioLv4

No me gusto mucho la redacción de los capítulo. Menos que se follara a su clon. Ademas las cosas pasan demasiado rápido si quieres a hacer un R 18 por lo menos dale alto de sentido. A los capitulos de falta trama en interacción de personajes. Cada capitulo se siente como un Resumen de una historia.

2yr
Blackwater
BlackwaterLv11

The story is a boring mess. The system is complete garbage with forced Quests and punishments and without the system the story is the most generic Naruto Isekai ever, little changes but nothing creative. The bland MC dosent do the story any favors.

2yr
CoffeeAficionado
CoffeeAficionadoLv5

Reveal spoiler

2yr
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