Great well-rounded story. The writing is awesome but there are a few grammar errors. The updates are steady, the story is wonderful, the characters are cool, and the world-building suffices for this type of story. It's nice to get a good light story like this one. Feel free to look at my story "Avatar: Macai's Journey".
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