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P_Young_4470
P_Young_4470Lv132yr
2022-07-10 05:31

last half of the synopsis makes no freaking sense where you on crack or something 😒 the synopsis is important it's the hook and arguably the most important part of the whole book if you can't respect that what's the point of any 9f it in the first place and this is my genre too right up my alley but now I'm not reading it you'd have been better off just leaving the last half off all together GOD CAN PEOPLE NOT TAKE THERE WRITING SERIOUSLY ANYMORE...??

My Online Girlfriend Is The Nine Heaven Divine Phoenix

My Daughter Is Too Cute
3.8
442 Chs

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WISEDRAGON
WISEDRAGONLv6

Seems fun lol …… Another book for single dreamers 🤣👌😂😂😂.

2yr

Alocraft
AlocraftLv4

网恋女友竟是九天神凰 the raw

2yr
InvalidUN
InvalidUNLv4

Support, I just hope there won't be harem, I like this kind of story but will be destroyed once MC became strong and collect girls. Although I like harem too on certain plots but not this one.

2yr
Tigrallef
TigrallefLv4

I've read the first 209 chapters and some of the comments on here seem a bit confused so here we go. First, no harem up to 209 anyway, he's dedicated to his girlfriend. The first section of the book is kind of a love comedy, but it still has dark points. Afterwards you find out it's set in Chinese mythology, as in Sun Wukong, the Jade Emperor and other figures exist, so it shifts to becoming a kind of political/ immortal war story. The author laid the groundwork for the shift early on so it's not a complete surprise but some might not like the change, maybe others love it.

2yr
frostnight32
frostnight32Lv2

this seems fun sjsjsksksksksjdjdkdoeosnxbdjskkanxjdisjxnxskskskxbdjowkdjdkxidksjddjdjdkdjsjdksksjdjdkdkddjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjsjsksksdjxjdjd

2yr
theaveragejoey
theaveragejoeyLv11

MC is very stupid and hypocritical which hurts the story massively. -spots a SSS technique, doesn't want to learn it because it might be hard to cultivate while at this point has a system that speeds up cultivation and is making decent money to buy materials to help cultivate even faster, he doesn't understand the rarity of SSS techniques even though the dude has lived in the world for over 20 years and received an education there, I assume he believes that all high tier cultivation techniques are common or something. -refuses any help from his online GF but will happily receive a SECOND SSS technique from a literal stranger he met twice at that point. -believes initially that the FL is stupid/crazy when she purposely does a bad deal to give him money for free by wanting to buy a 20 dollar sword for 10k from him. He is also very antagonistic towards her while she has been relatively kind to him overall. -goes on a spiel about status, power, money doesn't matter for love to encourage a fellow teacher to get a gf but actively refuses to meet his online gf due to her being way stronger then him.

2yr
Imperiex
ImperiexLv5

why do I feel this novel is also going to be held on just like other novels for the sake of maintaining high energy and not updating new chapters...WN is literally becoming trash day by day

2yr
Samhain666
Samhain666Lv15

I actually would really enjoy this novel, but the MC's personality really irrates me to no end, I wanted to keep reading, but I just feel like he's personality is not going to change at all, and that will make for a none enjoyable read for myself.

2yr
Daoist_He
Daoist_HeLv11

the development of the story is very slow also the character of the MC is very stupid. Rejecting SSS tier cultivation technique because he thinks its too hard to cultivate, what kind of idiotic mindset is that.

2yr
asaade
asaadeLv10

it became trash after 100 chapter, it became a mix of vr, cultivation, taoism even sun wukong and other chinese legends will got into the mix

2yr
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